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ganjames

ganjames

Well-Known Member
it's depressing... in a bad way, not in a kid cudi kind of way lol. you gotta work on the lyrics and how you let them come out.

and the clap from :22-:33 kills it.
 
racerboy71

racerboy71

bud bootlegger
yah, you need to work on a style instead of it sounding like you're just simply reading some lyrics off of a page... you need an edge, some sort of flow.. need to work on a style imo..
everyone thinks that rapping is easy, but this song surely demonstrates that not everyone can rap well..
 
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