check my music out please!!!!!!

joey123

Member

• Mar 25, 2012

• #1

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3DuK...DvjVQa1PpcFNNIUCM4sp8JNR_31tlVUo8PZNQuSN3NEY=

http://soundcloud.com/jjcray/jjcray-bring-it-down

share, subscribe, view, anything please!!!

 

ganjames

Well-Known Member

• Mar 25, 2012

• #2

it's depressing... in a bad way, not in a kid cudi kind of way lol. you gotta work on the lyrics and how you let them come out.

and the clap from :22-:33 kills it.

 

joey123

Member

• Mar 25, 2012

• #3

lol its my first song.. just messin around haha.

 

racerboy71

bud bootlegger

• Mar 25, 2012

• #4

yah, you need to work on a style instead of it sounding like you're just simply reading some lyrics off of a page... you need an edge, some sort of flow.. need to work on a style imo..
everyone thinks that rapping is easy, but this song surely demonstrates that not everyone can rap well..