Funny Weed-Reviews: Web-series looking for FEEDBACK

Hey guys, I'm one half of "The Strainger" an attempt at funny weed reviews- we are looking for feedback and also songs (If you know anyone looking to get their hiphop a few more listens) Let me know what you think and what it needs- thanks!

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Your delivery is pretty damn good actually. But the material needs a little work. It's not bad, just a little tighter..

Not bad editing.. could be a little better..

But I think you have something here man. Good luck!

I agree bro, you deff could have something there, best of luck to ya.