My school paper on legalizing marijuana

loveformetal1

loveformetal1

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I gotta be honest man. You have a lot of work to do on writing. But the statement you were trying to convey remained true. Good job.
 
danecooksays

danecooksays

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it gets kinda repetitive with the phrase "legalizing marijuana" in the first paragraph. you use therefore a lot and sometimes it's out of context. try using commas instead of periods. the facts you used were really good. i'm not sure if you need to cite them or not? use pronouns instead of proper nouns, that'll help out with the repetitiveness. other than that, good job. sorry if i sounded harsh, i'm just trying to help you out.
 
TodayIsAGreenday

TodayIsAGreenday

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might want to take your name off of it before you post it on here lol

its okay, definately can tell your a freshman

you say the word "argument" alot



and this sentence needs fixed

This can be proven false with this argument; the first piece of federal legislation to formally regulate marijuana was the Narcotics Act of 1914, which also regulated heroin, cocaine


college professers probably get like 50 papers on marijuana legalization a semester
 
18nowicansmoke

18nowicansmoke

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TodayIsAGreenday said:
might want to take your name off of it before you post it on here lol

its okay, definately can tell your a freshman

you say the word "argument" alot



and this sentence needs fixed

This can be proven false with this argument; the first piece of federal legislation to formally regulate marijuana was the Narcotics Act of 1914, which also regulated heroin, cocaine


college professers probably get like 50 papers on marijuana legalization a semester
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ahaha really? ya well i know my writing sucks :-\ im a math guy heh
 
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