A song I wrote for a girl.... Kind of Bob Dylan style.

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smithy78

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Aug 17, 2013

• #1

Hey guys!

I just wrote this song for a girl I like... I don't usually sing, but since it's a personal song I thought I'd give it a shot.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qqztkKocZoM

It's inspired by Bob Dylan's style of writing. She loves Bob Dylan, and so do I, so I'm hoping she'll like it.

What do you guys think?

 

direwolf71

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Aug 17, 2013

• #2

I like it, cool sound, awesome guitar work!

 

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smithy78

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Aug 17, 2013

• #3

Ah, thank you very much man. I really appreciate that, as I was a bit anxious about sending it to her. Cheers.

 

direwolf71

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Aug 17, 2013

• #4

She'll dig it I'm sure, good luck brother.

 

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smithy78

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Aug 17, 2013

• #5

Thanks very much bro.

 

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Master Stark

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Aug 17, 2013

• #6

Liked it, was good! two thumbs up from me.

 

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smithy78

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Aug 17, 2013

• #7

Thank you very much man! Really appreciate it!

 

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Master Stark

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Aug 17, 2013

• #8

[video=youtube;jxBA0JwQ6Vc]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jxBA0JwQ6Vc[/video] This is good dude, you're good at writing songs!

 

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smithy78

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Aug 17, 2013

• #9

Thanks again Master Stark! I'm delighted you think so!

 

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Master Stark

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Aug 17, 2013

• #10

smithy78 said:

Thanks again Master Stark! I'm delighted you think so!

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Welcome man

 

mr sunshine

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Aug 17, 2013

• #11

That was great.

 

OddBall1st

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Aug 17, 2013

• #12

Why am I think`n of lou Reed and wild side when I hear it ? Good solo though !i

 

chambray7

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Aug 17, 2013

• #13

i like this man this is awsome
love the guitar

 

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smithy78

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Aug 17, 2013

• #14

Wow, thank you all so much! Really means a lot to me.

Just to let you know, I sent it to Bela, the girl I wrote it for. She absolutely loves it and says it's the most romantic thing anyone has done for her. I'm pretty relieved and happy about that!

 

EvlMunkee

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Aug 17, 2013

• #15

You did a great job there smithy78! I know she's flipped over it. A lot of respect man

reminds me of cajun moon (jj cale)

 

EvlMunkee

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Aug 17, 2013

• #16

Master Stark said:

[video=youtube;jxBA0JwQ6Vc]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jxBA0JwQ6Vc[/video] This is good dude, you're good at writing songs!

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Seriously, That's pretty good!

 

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smithy78

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Aug 17, 2013

• #17

Thanks very much man!

And you're right on haha, I've been listening to JJ Cale A LOT recently. Good ears dude!

 

kinetic

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Aug 17, 2013

• #18

Digging it!
Good job man, I would totally listen to this song again.

 

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smithy78

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Aug 17, 2013

• #19

Thanks Kinetic! Delighted you like it!