I know i've been annoying

posting all my shit around this forum,

however this time i think i got something good finished, its a hip hop song i made thats got a nice dance breakdown for clubs and some good flo good singing and half ass mastering, lol it still needs some work but i need feedback.

+rep for comments/constructive criticism/praise

+bitchslap for negativity
Thx

http://soundcloud.com/reax-1/hot-fire

It's OK for a white dude...

No but I see what you are tryin to do, I like it, stay creative.....JR

lol im actually mexican.

www.myspace.com/reaxbeats

thats my older shit

thx tho

if i could be constructively critical i would say work on flow.
butttttttt... im not in the music industry either
keep it up though if you got a passion for it

TicTic said:

if i could be constructively critical i would say work on flow.
butttttttt... im not in the music industry either
keep it up though if you got a passion for it

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flow as in my lyrics?

that beat is kind of banging as for lyrics could use some work.. but overall its decent. Check this out. a little freestyle i did with the homies about weed.
[video=youtube;3ZAspOZ3pwE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3ZAspOZ3pwE[/video]

not bad.

check me out on youtube.

http://www.youtube.com/user/ReaxBeats