music is taste.
if you yourself like it, then there are bound to be somebody that do too.
aside from that.
well, you talking shit "im all that".
first of all, even the big rappers are pathetic when they do this. (to most people over 20 anyway.scared lil mofos that trying to be bad to get fear and respect.)
so, you gotta pick your audience when you do this.
younger crowd, you´d maybe get some awe from 12 year olds.
go pump your body up bit and you might impress 14-16 year olds.
me i listen to that and think "what a douche and a dick" (but im half again your age at least)
the song aint half bad, nice use of those samples, just gets really repetive soon. nice beat too, but nothing really original about it. but you can nod your head to it.
the lyrics also get repetive (the same tonal voice from the start to end) and i couldnt hear a "hook"
other than that, not bad, not really, might be interesting to hear your stuff later down the line, or not.
but ask for comments in a site like this.
at least half the guys are just gonna tear your shit down, being talentless douchebags themselves and jelous (least you are doing and trying something)
might want to check out a real musicians forum or rap forum, might get better answers.
personally i just find it best to follow your own inner ear.
follow other people too much and you´ll end up with shit (Especially if they are just talentless douches with absolute no right or knowledge to even make a comment beyond if they like it or not)