it is such a tragedy,
to lose someone for eternity
to never see them or feel
death is cruel, death is certain
i wish death was curable
but death is certain,death is a whisper
not like a child's voice,
but like a raging storm
death is here, death is for everybody
but death does not happen once
death of a child, death of a mother
death of my friend, death of my happiness
i saw death in my sleep
i lost to death , but
death never touched me
i looked closely in his eyes,
the reason i found for his mercy
everbody i loved was there
they were in his control,
death won the fight
death got me,without
touching me
Wow, thats a powerful expression of yourself for your first post here on Roll it Up. I really liked it and you are clearly a gifted writer. You must have had to experience death first-hand to have such a clear understanding of it.
And Im sorry for any grief you've had to go through.
Yes death is a curious thing about life. I find myself almost daily wondering if our awareness and fear of it is with us soley because of our very consciousness and awareness.
Do animals fear the death of their loved ones?
Do animals have loved ones? I belive they do. I believe love is universal and that every form of life knows it, no matter how small or seemingly-insignificant.
A jackel must see the bleached bones of his departed brother on the baked sands of the desert he wanders.
But does he form the thought in his relatively-unevolved mind that he will someday know the same fate?
Does he wonder if that skeleton was a jackel he knew at one point?
Does he even recognize that the bones before him are from another jackel?
Since no one will ever know the answers to any of these questions (in this life anyway), they are meerly thought-provoking, and perhaps even comforting (for me anyway).
For marijuana has helped me to the realization of how indescribably-amazing and wonderful life is. And not just this life we internet-surfers and pot-smokers are in right now. I mean all life.
The universe.
Because of marijuana I no longer fear death. Curiosity now over-rides any fear I may have had in the past.
I have faith in the unquestionable wonder of the universe and I acknowlege that no creature in the physical-realm will ever be able to have any certianty as to what really happens, what is right, whether there is an all-mighty creator "out there".
We're just along for the ride and I think we should just learn to feel gratitude for that. And learn to embrace - and let go of - the fear that will always come with it.
I still fear the death of my loved ones, though I can recognize that the fear I feel is only of the hurt I will undoubtedly feel for losing them.
That may sound selfish, but as I said I have no fear of death. So I can only extend the
reasons I feel no fear onto every other life around me.
For if I do not fear death because of the awesomness I anticipate after this life is finished, I must be able to anticipate no less for every other life in the universe (and on this planet; in my country; in my state; in my city; on my street; in my family).
Just as we were all conceived and born into this world the same way, so shall we all die and leave it in the same way.
Therefore death should not be feared or mourned. We should instead celebrate the lives of those we know who pass-on the next realm of this universe and anticipate the hope of meeting them again when we, ourselves pass-on.
Thanks for sharing your poem with us and I hope my words may be able to give you some comfort. Take care.