ok, here is my feedbak. you need more light (you already know this), it's too much of the same thing, one long shot. you need to cut it up, maybe put some ambient sound in the background just to fill the space and give vibe. The light problem is HUGE. it would be nice if you were in a room that looked cleaner and more professional, maybe if you had a jar of the bud and cut to pix. the images at the end were not impressive enough, i want HD, i want to see the crystals. fill the screen, do some fades, maybe after effects, show different pixs moving past.
the real lowdown, i could barely sit through 2.5 minutes of it because there was nothing to look at. no one wants to see your talking head. Especially when the light sucks and you're in someones bedroom that looks like grandma died there. You're not bad looking but why would any pothead want to sit and look at some guys head for 2 and a half minutes?
just my opinion and you asked for it. hope it's not hurtful.
I FORGOT TO MENTION - you need to script what you're going to say. you can't just yap, be concise, don't repeat, state the facts. no uummm or like or lemonish.