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It was worth reading this thread just to be introduced to Beardo ... i love this shit !
...... Nice tight beats ..nice hypnotic hook ... rap style is off the chain .... Reminds me of SPM ... South Park Mexican
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Ego ... a bit of advice ... get in with Beardo ....he knows his shit and i would bet a pound that he would improve your flow 90 %
I think what most of the guys here are saying is ... we have seen and herd this shit before ... some of us ...before you was born... some of us herd this shit when your mom was in high school , Point is , It's been done ... and done better , True you say it's just a hobby and your new to the game ... Maybe over time you could make an impact ... but the gun's and hoes thing is not the money .... Rap about YOUR life .... YOUR experiences ... make it funny ... tell a story that people can follow ... Random freestyle is good ... but it has no focus ..it's just a lot of words .
I'm not putting you down Ego ... not one bit .... you have the balls to show your stuff and i admire that .... Your aware that you have a long way to go ... but open your ears ( or in this case your eyes ) and listen / see what people here are trying to tell you .
It's not my kind of thing man ... but props for showing us
Roll a nice spike ... sit back and listen to this ...
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