My Dry Humor

i made a joke if it's funny...well it's funny if not who cares

a woman blazes two fattys an get dressed for company after her husband leaves. the doorbell rings, she answers it saying "what took you so long" before the man says anything she takes off his pants an throws him on the couch an fucks him. after two hours the doorbell rings she answers; the guy says "you like threesomes?" she says "if you're carlos, then who the fuck are you!", the other guy says "you called about your pipe yesterday."

This was far from funny for me. I think it was the fact that there was Zero punctuation...
Might want to add a few " , . ? ! " marks.

BquamB said:

This was far from funny for me. I think it was the fact that there was Zero punctuation...
Might want to add a few " , . ? ! " marks.

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oh well i tried.